Thursday, June 11, 2009

Few Words... Written in 4 Minutes ...

all that i remember is......
I was moving along the blue lane
of a transient hallucination......

the soul of your gone words
was echoing back of my mind.....

when the silver lines that followed the thunder flashed.....
i saw your face....

i stalled there in a trance.....
looking at your eyes seen through the
slender threads of rain seeping off the clouds.......

4 comments:

  1. i saw your face...
    i saw your face intimated with my feelings...'
    i saw your face in a mirror....

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  2. 4 Minutesil ithrayum...!

    Manoharam, Ashamsakal...!!!

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  3. always poetry or any creativity comes as sudden stroke which may be the master pieces too.
    Well written
    congrats
    sandhya

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